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An old mask you gave me long ago.

One made from a splintering wood.

The color a dark, rotting brown.

No smile carved onto its face.

   How I longed to see it smile.

I took my knife and created a grin.

One that resembled your own.

A crafty smile with a little taste.

   I wore it to sleep every night.

Each night I wondered how you dreamed.

If a nightmare fell, I would endure.

If dreaming sweetly, I could feel.

   I came knocking at your door.

Desiring to show you the mask's lovely grin.

The door was locked to keep me away.

I begged and cried to see your face.

   A tear of sadness touched the mask.

Behind the tear, anger did follow.

I removed the mask which you gave me.

I decided to finally erase the grin.

   Taking the knife from within my pocket,

I struck hard at the rotting wood.

You writhed and screamed from within your home.

No boundery would secure you from me.

   I took another stab at the mask's forehead.

The pain and suffering suddenly ceased.

I no longer needed the mask you gave.

Placing it on your step, I walked away.

   From beyond the door of your home.

From beyond what kept you safe and sound.

Your body lies dead, your face carved away.

The grin has forever been washed away.
:iconganonsphantom:
Composed: Winter of 2012

Another little story I thought up.
I had a lot of fun with this poem... A man torn in obsession with the woman he once loved, and the woman who wanted nothing to do with him. Instead of giving the man her heart when they were once in love, she provided him with a mask. The mask was an empty, emotionless shell of her own identity...something she believed the man could live with. When he realized that the mask was meaningless, he put a wicked and obsessive emotion into it. When he stabbed the face of the mask, the woman could feel the knife striking her actual face. Even though it was just a mask, it was still a piece of her identity...and he was taking it all away.

Take from this what you may... and most importantly, enjoy!! :aww:
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*CERose Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool. Reminds me of Poe. ;)
I'm with you on the mask metaphor. They seem to show up in my work too.
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:iconfireloup-garou:
Oh that was beautiful...ya know in a dark and twisted kind of way =p
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~GanonsPhantom Aug 23, 2012  Student Artist
I know, right... =P
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